Magic of Three!!! Choose one of these 'revelations' to build up to!!! Remember to:
Use Red Flag Words/Phrases
Drop a clue/hint
Include reaction (What did the character do & think/feel)
1st clue- dismiss, 2nd clue- start to worry, 3rd clue- REVELATION!!
Use Red Flag Words/Phrases
Drop a clue/hint
Include reaction (What did the character do & think/feel)
1st clue- dismiss, 2nd clue- start to worry, 3rd clue- REVELATION!!
Revelations:
Sitting on the rock was a glimmering, emerald-colored mermaid, who looked at her like she'd known her forever.
or
Hanging from the tree before me was the furriest monkey I had ever seen.
I was walking on the dock of my ship called "Suspense" it was an ordinary day. All of a sudden, I saw a glint of green behind me. I spun around as fast as I could to find nothing but the wide open see. My eyes are still playing tricks with me. I mumbled to myself, and then I went back to work. Just then, a soft laughing echoed behind me. Again I turned around but found nothing. Sweating now I tried not to think to much of it. Without Warning, there was a big splash. This time i was quick and i soon found out what it was.... Sitting on a rock was a glittering, emerald colored mermaid, who looked at me like i've known her forever.
ReplyDeleteMs.Fisher may you please add more posts. Maybe we can chat with you and the students over the summer on your blog!
ReplyDeletehey!!! was up? hope every one is having a great summer i am in steamboat colorado right now and i just cought my first fish!,a trout that was 8 inches long so we ate it "sadly" but it tasted great! here im talking about fish, and thats totally unexpected! It would be a great idea to add more posts like katie said!Also the idea of chatting with u over the summer would be great!! I bet everyone right now is having a great time were u are even if ur at home. Then again everyone have a great summer!!! P.S hope i see everyone next year in saxe and i will surly come visit u ms.fisher while the time being i have to be missing u at saxe.U were the best teacher i have ever had and i will miss u sooo much and everyone else! and then again have a great summer (^.^) bunny!!!! yay.0.0 o.o LOL merry summer and a happy summer time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and seriosly everyone have a great time at saxe and a great time the rest of the summer
ReplyDeleteDont be suprised guys if i go to saxe and have cruches i sprained my foot a couple days ago and hurts so be careful this summer unlike i was
ReplyDeleteyay mermaids i like ur thingie emma!!!
ReplyDeletei dont need cruches it feels a lot better yay!!!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you are okay, Jackie! So great to see you the other day!!!!!
ReplyDeleteTHANKS the kids were so cute asking me who were ur favorite teacher! all my answers would have been u but i couldnt always understand them
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