Here are some incredibly boring descriptions. Flip one. Flip them all! Be sure to copy and paste the original so we know which one you flipped. (Remember to cross out the beginning, start with what they/it had, and then say what it did.)Ex:Boring: He had red eyes.Flipped: Blood-red eyes stared at my ring, as though they recognized it.
Flip this:
It had green slime on it. It had a fake smile. It had 11 toes on each foot. It had one eye. It sang a beautiful song.
Green slime oozed down its puny body. A fake smile was plastered on her face. 11 jiggly toes squirmed around each foot. One blood red eye glared at me with a mix of expressions. Hey soul sister was the only tune that came through his tiny mouth.
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